Monday, August 24, 2009

While Still Lying in Bed - Sunday Scribblings #177 (Adult)

Swept out by the undercurrent of time
Rocks beneath - not so gentle reminder
Stopping to feel for the moment - he dies
Swirling credits of memory surrender

Adulthood the dream - afforded the young
Whose play's grown tired and the wind has strewn
Subject the tragedy - story that's done
Years beyond time all too often run through

Quick to the heart the war stories run past
Summon the hunger - insatiable thirst
All of the angels in line for the cask
Watch over abyss - expecting the worst

Holds hands to his head while counting the dead
Gone is the dream while still lying in bed

2 comments:

quin browne said...

i'm fond of the first lines...

Dee Martin said...

Interesting momentum - as though life is speeding by.