Monday, August 17, 2009

A Common Disillusion - Carry on Tuesday #14 (When a journey begins badly it rarely ends well )

A journey's every step
a galaxy of awareness
defining the road forward
the past - proven braveness

imperfect is the path
to a hazy destination
evolving to an endgame
through varied calculation

pivoting on an instant
the journey changes pace
the stamina of the traveller
worn upon his face

parametric processing
lost in the confusion
controlling every outcome
a common disillusion

6 comments:

George S Batty said...

your writing is powerful and causes one to stop and think. That's what it's all about.

anthonynorth said...

Deep and thoughtful. I liked it.

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful way to put it!

this journey started the right way

Rinkly Rimes said...

I like the play on words of the title.

Stan Ski said...

Always expect the unexpected...

cyclopseven said...

You are revolving at high speed man:)