Wednesday, August 19, 2009

The Graceful Dead - 3WW CLI (Decay, Graceful, Riot)

oils on a backdrop screen
air but full of stem and seed

signal decay out on the lawn
too far to see - too far gone

stranded there yet swept away
dancing, twirling forget the day

someone screamed or laughed or cried
the graceful dead in riot rise

6 comments:

Asleep On My Feet said...

Hahaha, you could be talking about fallen leaves... OR ZOMBIES!! Brraaaiiiinssss....
But seriously, excellent work.

Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

there's a brooding to this that I find really well done.

Sherri B. said...

I enjoyed the feeling this evoked...playful, yet a tiny bit sinister.

Bobbie Sandlin said...

Many ways to take this! Great writing!

Larry McCay said...
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PJD said...

Echo Asleep on my Feet. Definitely zombies.