With a jolt
silence shattered
juxtaposed
torn and tattered
Lost in sight
plain and simple
ribbons bleached
and fabric wrinkled
Drink the sound
of misplaced zeal
stoke the fire
and senses reel
Crash horizon
in dixie cup
ride the rainbow
thought interrupt
8 comments:
I like this. Each stanza makes me think. Love the urgency of the first line in each stanza
I'm with Pia on this. You sit back and sip each stanza, getting the marrow out of each before moving on.
Yeah, love the rhymes, reads quite fast with a little beat.
Nicely
Nice rhythm and flow in this as well as some fine lines and thoughts!
Quite lovely to read aloud. Mmmmm. THANK YOU!
it looks like it sounds - the jolt, the shattering, the thought interrupt. Loved it.
Wonderful rhyming going... each stanza a powerful one and goes together well.
who knew what was in the bottom of an unfilled dixie cup...and the idea of riding a rainbow....like the back of a bucking horse...
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