Friday, September 04, 2009

Space Enhanced Tone - 3WW CLIII (Glare, Luster, Threat)

like the calm before a gathering storm
the threat of space surrounds the tone
and the singing luster of a fingered form
brings forth emotion like waves gone rogue

stepping down to the glaring, whispered love
setup for slaughter on an ambush trail
the crescendo building from far above
the seas are boiling - tearing the sail

smell of surrender - surrounding the play
strangling vision in a passionate rift
set against portraits of sensible fray
the ship is off course - silent, adrift

now bring back the journey to a feeling of home
with elegant phrasing of space enhanced tone

6 comments:

Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

This has a song lyric feel to it, with some gem lines, man. I like it.

Asleep On My Feet said...

Every time I come back to read your lyrical poetry I find myself impressed all over again. Keep up the exceptional work, please.

PJD said...

A description of what goes through a musician's mind? Strong imagery. I really quite like this.

gautami tripathy said...

Loved the build up in here!

it was not a dream, certainly not a memory

Tumblewords: said...

I like the strength in this - the way you meld the opposites in fine fashion.

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