Teasing out the questions
life's meager salvation
walk atop the fences
on to her temptation
Generate an interest
numb in acquiescence
struck by his insistence
she loses carnal innocence
Stories told of fallen
angels in the substrate
transcending time alone
crashing golden landscape
Eyes toward the heavens
heart of glass in shatters
splintered rose in holograms
lost in fractal matters
Swim the lost emotions
like salmon on the falls
the swelling of devotion
sent scrambling up the walls
8 comments:
Really struck by how well this is constructed, who the lines draw you in deeper and deeper.
My head is swirling in the vortex you created.
ooohhh boy!!!!!!!
Yeah, like the way you did this, especially the stanza that ends 'lost in fractal matters'.
loved this but especially the last verse "the swelling of devotion
sent scrambling up the walls" resonates
Keep posting stuff like this i really like it
A nice read!
walking on fences and scambling walls...a tease of salvation inbetween...swmming lost in holograms...a simple matter of beauty...
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