As the sun melts
into the bay
the captured blood
of the passing day
Quickly traverses
the water's surface
like veins in ripples
the current traces
Feelings of loss
jinx the sultan's swing
straddles the horizon
and the waters bring
Skeptical thoughts
of shadows and time
qualify fears
of transient time
7 comments:
This has a pace and rhythm to it that make it really enjoyable to read.
A nice, smooth read - and the title works very well!
Wonderful title.
It flows beautifully!
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Love the "captured blood"! I've seen this and felt it, too. Good one!
What a beautiful image you created with your words.
Atmospheric imagery - great read.
I rather enjoyed that. Thanks for the post. Your style has a certain flair that makes it read itself, if that makes any sense.
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